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Post by lucassena on Feb 8, 2009 15:38:17 GMT -5
Hi guys, I am a 15 years old Brasillian caled Lucas Sena, I been starting to do my skins, I hope tou enjoy Oh, i almost forget, sorry for my bad english ;D XRT Ac Delco, BR Dragons( my lfs team), It's nbot finished
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Post by thunderhead on Feb 9, 2009 10:09:54 GMT -5
Try harder. And the screenshot is crap. Cant see a thing.
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Post by MAGGOT on Feb 9, 2009 10:53:30 GMT -5
The logo (BR Dragons) doesn't seem to fit the rest of the car. I think you should try to design a scheme around the BR Logo - that is, design a scheme that that logo will fit in with.
Also, for the screenshot, don't use a FOV over 90 degrees. With such heavy perspective distortion it's difficult to see the scheme - I can't make out what is happening in the rear of the car because of the extreme perspective.
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Post by lucassena on Feb 9, 2009 11:09:42 GMT -5
Thanks for the advices
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Post by Vilante on Feb 9, 2009 17:03:36 GMT -5
Also mate, move the "Sun Heading" slider so that the sun lights up the side of the skin you're taking the screenshot of. At the moment the whole side of the skin is in the shade and therefore hard to see
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Post by lucassena on Feb 14, 2009 16:56:13 GMT -5
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Post by MAGGOT on Feb 14, 2009 17:17:07 GMT -5
Much better in the screenshot department. The skin itself has a certain charm to it, too. The carbon fiber weave I'd suggest only putting on the hood, though - as it is now, you 've got it on the whole top section of the front which looks weird. Also, from looking at the screenshot, it looks like the numberplate is too far back and being cut off by the end of hood. And finally, the red detail doesn't align where the side meets the roof there. Keep at it.
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Post by lucassena on Feb 24, 2009 14:09:51 GMT -5
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Post by lucassena on Mar 3, 2009 14:01:07 GMT -5
New Skin guys
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Post by Pate on Mar 4, 2009 20:51:08 GMT -5
Ouch... You forgot wireframe in mirrors
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Post by lucassena on Mar 5, 2009 10:59:46 GMT -5
True
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